tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post1822382383601767294..comments2023-04-09T03:05:12.919-05:00Comments on What's in my head.: To Late:desk49http://www.blogger.com/profile/05795159954019523527noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-25631361634755258942015-06-09T19:00:20.594-05:002015-06-09T19:00:20.594-05:00Lynn:
To much or not enough
in my hands guns
have...Lynn:<br />To much or not enough<br />in my hands guns <br />have been around<br /><br /> desk49https://www.blogger.com/profile/05795159954019523527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-89152450360680333152015-06-02T08:31:41.537-05:002015-06-02T08:31:41.537-05:00I've never fired a gun, but you describe it pe...I've never fired a gun, but you describe it perfectly. Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-52148876082317756482015-05-29T15:18:00.778-05:002015-05-29T15:18:00.778-05:00Snaggle:
Don't you worry
please do not fear
I ...Snaggle:<br />Don't you worry<br />please do not fear<br />I love me so do <br />not shard a tear<br /><br />My body's great<br />my mine is fine<br />No pain on me would<br />I do at anytime<br /><br />Have a great day and thanksdesk49https://www.blogger.com/profile/05795159954019523527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-58654932744390097062015-05-29T02:41:24.983-05:002015-05-29T02:41:24.983-05:00Don't do it!
Rings in my ear-
There is only De...Don't do it!<br />Rings in my ear-<br />There is only Death<br />All must fear<br />Judgement to follow<br />Such an Act<br />By God n more<br />All wil attack. Snaggle Toothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07197042129309670471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-35564287771184279332015-05-28T16:46:07.746-05:002015-05-28T16:46:07.746-05:00Sara:
Darkness does lie in us all
We tend to forge...Sara:<br />Darkness does lie in us all<br />We tend to forget the light<br />we shine into others lives<br /><br />Thanks for the kind words.desk49https://www.blogger.com/profile/05795159954019523527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-37723836186579266462015-05-28T14:22:27.719-05:002015-05-28T14:22:27.719-05:00Wow. The comment box got BIG. OMG.
This poem is ...Wow. The comment box got BIG. OMG. <br /><br />This poem is interesting. Sometimes the need to rid ourselves of an over-powering negative feeling makes us forget how important we really are, especially to those who love us.<br /><br />That said, the imagery in the poem was wonderfully done. Your words really captured the sound and feeling of handling a gun. It reminded me of my childhood and the many times I heard the click and boom of a shotgun. I come from a hunting family, mostly quail and other birds. I hated it, but was often sent to pick up the birds that were shot. It certainly made me aware of what death looks like. It's never pretty or nice.Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.com