tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post5657172393060942009..comments2023-04-09T03:05:12.919-05:00Comments on What's in my head.: Love:desk49http://www.blogger.com/profile/05795159954019523527noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-38675934558606897582010-11-01T21:57:13.110-05:002010-11-01T21:57:13.110-05:00Talon:
I hope not abuse just betrayal.
October 26...Talon:<br />I hope not abuse just betrayal.<br /><br />October 26, 2010 11:06 PM<br /><br />Falen:<br />Some people are just pushed out.<br /><br />October 27, 2010 12:29 AM<br /><br />Lynn:<br />I to but I wish I didn't.<br /><br />October 27, 2010 9:32 AM<br /><br />Jewel:<br />New love is but betreaded love is not.<br /><br />October 27, 2010 12:12 PM<br /><br />JH:<br />Thanks for dropping by again. Long time no see.<br /><br />October 28, 2010 2:57 AM<br /><br />ElizabethR: <br />Sorry but I like to turn things upside down most of the time.<br /><br />So when you said I made ugly betrayal, beautiful. I thought yep I did that. Wait a mineut, I did that? Me?<br /><br />October 28, 2010 9:23 AM<br /><br />Kkrige:<br />And welcome and thanks you for your kind words.<br /><br />October 28, 2010 12:26 PM<br /><br />Snaggle:<br />So true. How many times are we blinded by our own desire?<br /><br />October 30, 2010 5:14 AM<br /><br />Quilly:<br />I hope all is well now and sorry if I brought up bad memories.<br /><br />Jannie:<br />True abuse is real but it is real with words, feelings and physical.<br /><br />Wendy:<br />Thanks for dropping by again.<br /><br />October 31, 2010 11:10 PM<br /><br />Jamie:<br />It is a shame anyone should know how betrayal feels. Then we would live in a perfect world<br /><br />November 1, 2010 6:14 AMdesk49https://www.blogger.com/profile/05795159954019523527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-85310841230765046842010-11-01T02:56:29.364-05:002010-11-01T02:56:29.364-05:00You captured the sense of betrayal so accurately, ...You captured the sense of betrayal so accurately, so well felt. This is good, Ellis.JamieDedeshttp://musingbymoonlight.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-44452693948115674222010-10-31T20:40:37.835-05:002010-10-31T20:40:37.835-05:00This is my good friend's weekly match.com upda...This is my good friend's weekly match.com update. ha ha!<br /><br />I love the line, "leaning on arms that hold up her soul".Wendyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04232693432045335251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-11262270620009189892010-10-31T16:33:05.430-05:002010-10-31T16:33:05.430-05:00Dearest Ellis William Moore,
that line about thos...Dearest Ellis William Moore,<br /><br />that line about those arms that hold up her soul is my favorite one.<br /><br />I hadn't thought about abuse as in Talon's comment, but yes, I see it clearly now. I was thinking more like just a general cad.<br /><br />Good one!<br /><br />xoJannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-10235876497974023862010-10-30T23:31:43.366-05:002010-10-30T23:31:43.366-05:00Your poem mirrored the beginning and the end of my...Your poem mirrored the beginning and the end of my marriage. Bittersweet, but mostly bitter. Happily, after a few years passed, some of the better memories returned. <i>Not</i> enough of them to make me forget the bad stuff though!quillyhttp://quilldancer.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-38640208444908706352010-10-29T03:45:26.179-05:002010-10-29T03:45:26.179-05:00This makes me think of the fickle sort of love, qu...This makes me think of the fickle sort of love, quickly fallen into, n but an instant to fall out in anger. U think the title is a bit misleading when considering the poems conclusion!Snaggle Toothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07197042129309670471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-7567435702685815432010-10-28T11:18:23.485-05:002010-10-28T11:18:23.485-05:00ohh, some days I wonder indeed. Sad that such betr...ohh, some days I wonder indeed. Sad that such betrayal has to be searched for. honesty is worth so much. nice writeKatherine Krigehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00737873330498032718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-43428415713535597902010-10-28T08:11:11.678-05:002010-10-28T08:11:11.678-05:00Ellis,
You have captured the ugliness of betrayal ...Ellis,<br />You have captured the ugliness of betrayal beautifully. I think this is the best of your poems. (yet :) )ERhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13557041776084833853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-34641094237562888452010-10-27T22:30:58.384-05:002010-10-27T22:30:58.384-05:00Oh my... love this, nice flow and message conveyed...Oh my... love this, nice flow and message conveyed. great shotJhpoetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02745726173641549524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-27882957684575700632010-10-27T10:29:43.352-05:002010-10-27T10:29:43.352-05:00Ah, isn't new love so wondrous?Ah, isn't new love so wondrous?Jewel Allenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09614039445924074306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-63878276881175576182010-10-27T07:41:30.410-05:002010-10-27T07:41:30.410-05:00I know that look. Well captured, Ellis.I know that look. Well captured, Ellis.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13984802196897920610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-5087451742211966612010-10-27T00:03:29.944-05:002010-10-27T00:03:29.944-05:00that reminds me of when you fall out of love and s...that reminds me of when you fall out of love and see all the crap you didn't see before. Love is not only blind, it sports beer goggles!THUNDERCAThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09174441106486023428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-58032350883918438152010-10-26T22:08:33.811-05:002010-10-26T22:08:33.811-05:00Oh, this made me think of abuse...and it made me s...Oh, this made me think of abuse...and it made me sad.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.com