tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post4729827781305836698..comments2023-04-09T03:05:12.919-05:00Comments on What's in my head.: In too Deep:desk49http://www.blogger.com/profile/05795159954019523527noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-49546922790051117602018-02-24T13:18:42.247-06:002018-02-24T13:18:42.247-06:00Snaggle Tooth:
Is first you see
For love is never...Snaggle Tooth: <br />Is first you see<br />For love is never <br />too deep for thee<br /><br />Nidhi: <br />It seems your next<br />And love for you <br />is never complexed<br /><br />Denise Covey: <br />Thank you for coming my way<br />And all the nice things <br />you always say<br /><br />Adura Ojo: <br />all the color and shades it seems<br />Is what makes love <br />such a great theme<br /><br />Pat Garcia: <br />the verse, you was on fire<br />Yes a true true love <br />we all desire<br /><br />Hillary Melton-Butcher: <br />your name alone, love it rings<br />And you went and said <br />such nice things<br /><br />Deborah Drucker: <br />wow if not for a wife, you I’d see<br />Yes you’d be a woman <br />meant for me<br /><br />Yolanda Renée: <br />your insight is always true<br />So to you a <br />BIG THANK YOU<br /><br />L.G. Keltner: <br />In poetry one can always say, I love you<br />Yet in truth after that, <br />it’s what you go and do<br /><br />Dolorah: <br />like Deborah you’re a woman after my heart<br />But if you find true love, <br />from them you should never part<br /><br />Nilanjana Bose: <br />You’re always kind when you post my way<br />What more can <br />this old man to you say<br /><br />Carrie Ann Golden: <br />What more can I say<br />Humor is sometimes <br />the best way<br /><br />Pat Hatt: <br />Thanks for dropping round<br />If yoga is working, <br />I’ll buy a 100 pounds <br /><br />D.G. Hudson:<br />Is there is a perfect partner around<br />I hope you find her<br />and settle down<br /><br />Kalpanaa M:<br />Humorous? I really like to act insane<br />But it is not always good<br />For on my fun, sometimes it rains<br /><br />Kalpanaa M:<br />It seems yours I missed in my reply’s<br />I’m glad that verse to you did relate<br />But staying up late you’ll get sleepy eye’s<br /><br />Toi Thomas:<br />Ambitions can make us go too deep<br />But love taken in steps<br />Most likely will be complete <br /><br />Christopherscottauthor: <br />A love through life that’s flowing<br />And all I know will tag along<br />yet some is dark and others glowing<br /><br />Keith’s Ramblings:<br />Yes there’s a lot of things to be too deep in<br />And love could be surely one<br />For some of us it becomes a sin<br /><br />J Lenni Dorner:<br />Been there, felt of which, I ask<br />Not like me I hope for, I was<br />Thought of being, from low class<br />desk49https://www.blogger.com/profile/05795159954019523527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-79436808166374512022018-02-23T23:02:05.282-06:002018-02-23T23:02:05.282-06:00Great poem!
Been there, felt a lot of that.
Way to...Great poem!<br />Been there, felt a lot of that.<br />Way to go.J Lenni Dornerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07961335286982498158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-21583343630802922302018-02-23T07:22:51.329-06:002018-02-23T07:22:51.329-06:00There are worse thing to be deep in! Love what you...There are worse thing to be deep in! Love what you've said and the way you've said it. Yes, I love it - deeply!Keith's Ramblingshttp://keithsramblings.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-35177849616057319542018-02-22T14:29:02.282-06:002018-02-22T14:29:02.282-06:00An flowing poem about unrequited love, and the str...An flowing poem about unrequited love, and the strange journey love takes a person on. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-75811698282595636722018-02-22T08:15:21.344-06:002018-02-22T08:15:21.344-06:00What a clever poem and very suited to the prompt.
...What a clever poem and very suited to the prompt.<br />People often go in too deep for their work or other ambitions, but when it's for love that's when it becomes all-consuming, especially if it's unconditional.<br />Toi Thomashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493934864387695248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-4625666196908630232018-02-22T00:07:50.997-06:002018-02-22T00:07:50.997-06:00The opening sequence, I can relate,
Staying up wri...The opening sequence, I can relate,<br />Staying up writing in hours of late.<br /><br />That was a fun poem to read, it had a good flow to it.Elizabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15165210377903518274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-34021365591479422402018-02-21T21:28:21.302-06:002018-02-21T21:28:21.302-06:00And a comment you shall have because of your great...And a comment you shall have because of your great sense of humour and you because said everything while claiming you weren't saying it. Kalpanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02503951641129389045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-897687222774166502018-02-21T21:03:37.247-06:002018-02-21T21:03:37.247-06:00A witty poem looking for the perfect partner. What...A witty poem looking for the perfect partner. What is perfect at first sight may be broken beneath. You have a talent for dreaming big. Enjoyed the words, the rhyme and the tongue in cheek attitude. Well done.D.G. Hudsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06213237734772028645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-36996165064528778322018-02-21T18:02:58.709-06:002018-02-21T18:02:58.709-06:00Thanks to yoga three times week
Sometimes two as t...Thanks to yoga three times week<br />Sometimes two as things I seek<br />The head to the heels won't be too bad<br />Now where is she at my pad?<br /><br />haha fun one indeed.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-82801162459182655852018-02-21T16:15:47.521-06:002018-02-21T16:15:47.521-06:00I love the humor in this poem :-) I love the humor in this poem :-) Carrie Annhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08489203407621469236noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-60109801626075642702018-02-21T02:55:02.406-06:002018-02-21T02:55:02.406-06:00Love is the greatest thing to be in too deep! Well...Love is the greatest thing to be in too deep! Well crafted. Great to read a poem entry :)Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-45915810273885100182018-02-20T23:54:42.387-06:002018-02-20T23:54:42.387-06:00I'm sure some people fall deeply, madly, uncon...I'm sure some people fall deeply, madly, unconditionally in love and it lasts forever. Not me; marriage should have a contract, and a time limit.<br /><br />Nicely done.dolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-88332846918192916482018-02-20T20:55:50.745-06:002018-02-20T20:55:50.745-06:00Wonderful poem! I always thought poetry might be t...Wonderful poem! I always thought poetry might be the best way to capture love in writing, though I don't trust myself with that monumental task. Well done!L.G. Keltnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07624902347418621283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-64192782499852669242018-02-20T20:46:06.783-06:002018-02-20T20:46:06.783-06:00Falling in love?
That fall might be too deep.
Don&...Falling in love?<br />That fall might be too deep.<br />Don't limit yourself with expectations.<br />Be open for anything and your prayers will be answered!<br /><br />Lovely and fun, thank you!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-64867161912351063212018-02-20T16:33:12.618-06:002018-02-20T16:33:12.618-06:00In too deep you will not go
unless several conditi...In too deep you will not go<br />unless several conditions we meet<br />No bills to be paid or the pitter patter of little feet<br />Love your mother?<br />I would need to meet this lady<br />Before my commitment would be complete.<br /><br />Deborah Druckerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05649396302648104610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-8958632782137062812018-02-20T15:42:45.008-06:002018-02-20T15:42:45.008-06:00Hi Desk 49 - I always love your take with your ver...Hi Desk 49 - I always love your take with your verses, or poems - so good to read and let it ring along happily in time. Sometimes we need to sink quietly and let ourselves get in too deep to experience life ... congratulations - cheers HilaryHilary Melton-Butcherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17596532480645510678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-74342374497268402922018-02-20T10:06:00.456-06:002018-02-20T10:06:00.456-06:00You brought it to its point in this verse and I lo...You brought it to its point in this verse and I love it<br /><br />That’s too deep<br />Most of you’d squeal<br />No way could people fall<br />in love head over heels<br />Yet it is those people,<br />With a love that’s on fire<br />a love that we want<br />And have always desired.<br /><br />It is only when we make the commitment to go down in the deep that we find love and we will find it on an unconditional level.<br />Excellent poetry. <br /><br />Shalom aleichem,<br />Pat GPat Garciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04204650731843984192noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-35209343687872053872018-02-20T02:36:42.324-06:002018-02-20T02:36:42.324-06:00Love is deep: Different colours and shades.
Thank...Love is deep: Different colours and shades. <br />Thanks for sharing, Desk 49.Adura Ojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10787703060107491771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-44589385212404219262018-02-19T22:19:18.804-06:002018-02-19T22:19:18.804-06:00I'm no poet to comment in rhyme as do so many ...I'm no poet to comment in rhyme as do so many clever people. Your poem is fresh and at times witty, at times thoughtful. Thanks for penning it in response to our WEP challenge, In Too Deep. It certainly fits perfectly to the prompt.<br /><br />Thanks so much for participating in WEP. It's a good idea to pop a comment on our post at WEP when you publish. I see you've been up a few days now...good to publish early...<br /><br />Denise Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578250866486058815.post-64573558459958382842018-02-09T04:07:57.571-06:002018-02-09T04:07:57.571-06:00Too deep in sunsets n trees
Is a welcome thought f...Too deep in sunsets n trees<br />Is a welcome thought for me. <br />Tho if the bird poop<br />pile runs over your head, <br />You should move from under that tree,<br />N stop feeding them bread!<br /><br />True love may be <br />Too deep a thing<br />To easily find.<br /><br />But it is so<br />easy to <br />Dig a hole<br />too deep...<br />Snaggle Toothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07197042129309670471noreply@blogger.com