This night be dark
Our moon is full
My master Satan
Has all his tools
His tongue was sharpened
With words to please
For your soul he’ll
Take from thee
We demons roam
Both far and wide
On this his most
Hallow night
Dress up like
What you are
For your now
In his back yard
I hear screams
From those who didn’t
Heed my pleas
Now we demons feed
Jack looked
at the note Raven had passed him: I need to talk to you. For God sake
please meet me in back of Saint Mary’s before the party.
Great. I go
out with her one time a month ago and now she thinks she owns me. Why in the
hell did I let the guys talk me into dating her? “She likes you, Jack.”
“She is easy.” “She’ll date anyone.” Just then a piece of paper hit me.
What the hell! Is this note day or something? I unfolded it was from
Bill. Locker room after class.
I followed
Bill through the Locker room door and before the door could even close he
shoved me against the wall.
Bill had
fire in his eyes and started yelling. What have you done? Do I have to lead you
around everywhere by the hand like some little kid? JoAnn just told me
Raven is pregnant. Don’t you know what a fucking rubber is? The morning
after pill? Shit, you’re the number one goalie in the state and I’m the
number one defender. Do you think R.O.U. will pay you extra to be toting
a kid around? Much less a wife. She is going to have her hand so
deep in your pocket. You do remember what the R.O.U. scout said?
The two of us- not you, not me, not one without the other. Fuck, just
stay away from me you, ass hole. Bill stomped out of the locker room.
What in the
hell is he so worked up about? Shit, it’s not like her kid couldn’t be
anyone of the guys on the soccer team. I know I was not the first or the
last. I’ll tell her she it’s my word against hers. Everyone in town
knows what kind of girl she is. They would never believe her over me.
Raven could
see Saint Mary’s across the street. She had put on her nicest
dress. She wanted Jack to be as happy for her as she was. She had
always wanted a baby and why not Jacks baby. For years she had a crush on
him. She know he lived and breathed soccer. That is all he would
talk about in school. She would not take that away from him.
They could live together at the dorm then after he got out of R.O.U. they could
get married. No one needed to know but him. Some of the girls keep
asking her. They didn’t know. All she told them was she was going to live
with a sick Aunt up north for the rest of the school year. She thought
she saw Jack wearing the devils costume. She kissed her father goodbye
and started across the street.
Bill
watched her go behind the church. Hell, Bill and Jack have been friends
for too long to let some slut come between them. When he got home he’d
call Jack and tell him what he needed to do so Raven would never bother them
again. If Jack just had the balls to do it she would never tell a soul
whose kid it was. Bill took his little brothers hand and started up the
sidewalk to Raven’s house he heard it was going to be one hell of a party
tonight.
Raven saw
Jack over by the Oak tree. When she placed her hand on his shoulder he spun
around and placed his hand over her mouth pulled out a large knife and with all
his might he sunk it as deep as he could into the tree next to her head.
Now tell someone whose baby you think it is. Then Jack turned and walked
away.
Crying
uncontrollable, Raven slid down the tree. Raven turned her head just
enough to watch Jake walk away.
“Are you okay, young lady?” a soft voice asked
Raven.
Raven looked up and
saw a three foot tall person dressed like a lawn gnome. “Do I look
okay? The father to my baby just tried to kill me. I hate him I
wish he was dead.”
The Gnome looked at
her. “Would you give even,” then he smiled and leaned in closer and
whispered something in Ravens ear.
“Yes, even that!”
Raven cried.
Jacked had just stepped out into the
street when he heard the tires squealing and felt the car hit him. He
felt something hit him in the back and his body wrapping around it with a loud
crack.
Raven’s father saw the whole thing even Jack hit the fireplug. From the
way his head hit his feet he knew the young man’s back was broken and he was
dead before he slid to the sidewalk. Raven father ran down the steps to
check on the man and his shoulder hit someone. Bill flew backwards off
the steps and landed on his back in the flower bed. Bill started coughing
up blood. He looked down to see one of Ravens Garden Gnome’s head sticking out
of his chest looking back at him.
Raven stood up and started laughing. Jack got what he deserved. All she wanted was to get out of this damn town. Now all she has to do was lie to some other dumb ass jock about being pregnant and sucker him into getting her out of here. She heard low growling behind her and turned to see four demons within inches of her. They looked hungry and were smiling. She
tried to scream but it was too late.
You could hear laughter in the wind. “Yes not just one but all of their souls.”
Raven stood up and started laughing. Jack got what he deserved. All she wanted was to get out of this damn town. Now all she has to do was lie to some other dumb ass jock about being pregnant and sucker him into getting her out of here. She heard low growling behind her and turned to see four demons within inches of her. They looked hungry and were smiling.
You could hear laughter in the wind. “Yes not just one but all of their souls.”
1003 WC
18 comments:
Wow. Deliriously dark. Raven is much more complicated than they knew...
Very satisfying Halloween tale. More to Raven than meets the eye. Great take on the prompt -
very dark. Like the choice of name for the character too - Raven. Well done! And Welcome back.
Hi,
This is a sad story for me. It depicts the rottenness of the human condition as it is today in many parts of our western civilisation.
Shalom aleichem,
Pat Garcia
Better watch who you scorn or one may wish they were never born.
Raven is one evil woman, and with Satan at her side, horrifically so, but beware the company you keep! Love the double treat, a poem and a flash!
A wonderful addition to the WEP Halloween Challenge! Thanks for participating!
Child: What can I say? Deliriously dark, you make my head sway.
Bose: How sweet. Too bad Raven became those demons treat.
Dear Garcia: Sadness on Halloween night. You make an old demons heart fill with delight.
Hatt: Scorn is a good word for this night, but greed and deception was Satin delight
Renée: Raven was evil and her soul Satin earned. Demons had a feast of her for what she yearned.
Whoa!!! Dark and twisted, perfect Halloween tale.
Can't take it for granted who is the bad guy. Turns out everybody is in this story. Except why did the father end up with a garden knome in his chest?
McHicol: Dark and twisted live within my mind.
Drucker: Not Ravens father but Bill the guy that put Jack up the the kinfe thing. Greed he would rune Ravens life so Jack and him could get into ROU school
Everyone is evil. Ouch! I wouldn't want to live in such a town.
Hi Desk 49 - Raven sounds like she might survive ... but there's lots of evil there ... Halloween at its best - cheers Hilary
Good and dark, Ellis!
It seems I got three new
Commenting on me
I'm glad to say thinks
To each one of three
Godim:
I know you saw
What you read
But Ravens father
Was not dead
Butcher:
She gave her soul
To see him died
Right before
Her very eyes
Lynn:
A simple thanks
Is all I can say
It’s been so long we've
Passed each other’s way
Well, that was a Halloween trick at its worse. To make garden gnomes into villains and high schooler's into prey. And poor Raven, taken advantage of when she had just gotten hurt will pay a price too. Well done.
Nancy
Wow, this Raven. How did she get to be such a badass? A cool customer intent on ruining the lives of as many as she can. I'd be outta that town if I managed to drop by. Like the Satanic poem, followed by the evil tale of Raven.
Thanks desk, for joining the challenge.
Denise :-)
Again there's two more
stopping by my door
Williams:
The Devil does like to play
What more can this writer say
Covey:
She looked so sweet
yet heart of stone
Raven and Satan's
Their deal was sewn
The gnome out front here will never look the same again! Good Halloween theme tale! N I am not even Irish! Very entertaining!
Snaggle:
Tho last yet
never forgeten
one of few
still within
my shortcuts
Supper nice to see you.
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