I was asked to post a comment I made
from another blog. Jamie Dedes its been tweaked.
A female chauvinist
you call yourself
for you see things
of love, as woman
A strong sailing ship,
a brand new car
or a rainbow after
a sweet summer rain
Then what would I be
for only a woman could
inspire so much love
like the crescent moon
The man in the moon
is only there because
she holds him
dear to her heart
First time written for http://musingbymoonlight.com/
Second time posted for http://sarahealy.com/
14 comments:
Ellis that is beautiful!
I think of the man on the moon as "man" but I think of the moon as a woman. Now why is that?? :-)
Jewel thought it beautiful ... see, see, see. :-) Bet Sara liked it too ... I will have to visit these ladies.
Ellis, I'm so glad you did this. What a lovely poem ... such a memorable one.
Thanks! :-)
behind evry good man in the moons is a wimmins wit love! exsillent pome, ellis, thanks yoo.
wit loves from me BB
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I love the last stanza - it's beautiful...the man in the moon is not alone and I'm glad. I used to worry about him up there by himself.
That last stanza is gorgeous indeed. What a lovely poem.
Ellis -- This is really cool. You already know how much I liked this poem:~)
BTW...Saturday morning EST you will be featured at my site:~) Stop by, if you can! It's a special edition.
Also, thanks for the link and the opportunity to make some new friends:~)
loverly.
hey did I say something about you at my place? wonder what it was, do be a dear and take a look for me please.
Thank you for the lovely images -- and thanks for stopping by my blog...always a pleasure to visit new sites...
Ellis,
This is officially notify you that you have been awarded The Cherry on Top Award.
Drop by my site when you can:~)
I like this. Particularly, the last "man in the moon."
I always thought it was a little odd to think of a man in the moon rather than the ancient identification of woman with the moon. My best.
i like that : ) i'm glad you posted it!
Jewel:
Not sure one has a beard
The other gives forth a loving light to see by.
October 8, 2010 2:07 AM
Jamie:
Thanks most of my work I leave with the one I did it for.
October 8, 2010 3:06 AM
Jannie:
Thank you
Talon:
LOL I know at times I wondered what he did because she will turn him upside down on his head.
Lynn:
Thank you. All of you are making my head swell.
Sara:
Sure and thanks. Will check it out.
Paige:
Sometimes I worry about what people are saying but I’ll check it out to.
Wye:
Will thanks you for dropping by and checking our mine.New here so thanks for coming by.
Sara:
Sorry had a MMA & Tough-man fight to go to last night will be over today.
October 9, 2010 10:48 AM
Count:
Let me add you to my thank you list
Thank you for dropping bye
Thank you for reading
Thank you for your reply
October 10, 2010 4:21 AM
sssdawna:
Your first time I see
So a simple Thank you and you’re welcome
Awww! The Man in the Moon line got me! It is interesting, having no idea whatthe post was!
I'm a Libber myself-
Snggle:
It came from Jamie Dedes blog. I posted the web sight.
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