I'm awash in the tide of the time ripples dancing through my mind As they remind me of so many good things All but forgotten in Who I am now- Here in this place I need them...
Thanks small things we never see until it's to late and we find out the one we thought loved us is gone. Then it hurts seeing the little ripples we missed all along.
Reading the poem and then the comments brings this poem into my heart even more. It's true when we think back on a relationship and the things we missed. That said, your poetry gets stronger and stronger.
I also love the interplay between you and Snaggle Tooth. Poets talking to each other in poetry:~)
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I'm awash in the tide
of the time ripples
dancing through my mind
As they remind me
of so many good things
All but forgotten in
Who I am now-
Here in this place
I need them...
Who we are
they can never
change it
only we
have the right
Thanks for still being here for me and from me.
This ripple in time - love the sound of those words.
Lynn:
Thanks small things we never see until
it's to late and we find out
the one we thought loved us is gone.
Then it hurts seeing the little ripples
we missed all along.
Reading the poem and then the comments brings this poem into my heart even more. It's true when we think back on a relationship and the things we missed. That said, your poetry gets stronger and stronger.
I also love the interplay between you and Snaggle Tooth. Poets talking to each other in poetry:~)
Sara:
Where have you been????
I've missed you and your blog
You more but I can't say that
Thanks for showing up.
You know you had me worried something happen.
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